LI: To edit our writing using DRAFT
DRAFT stands for:
D - Delete
R- Rearrange
A - Add
F - Fix
T - Talk
We used DRAFT to edit our poems. Me and my partner (Leon) created a poem about bravery. What we did was look for an abstract noun. A abstract noun is something that exist but you cannot touch it. In our poem we used the 5 senses which are see, touch, smell, hear and taste. We also created complex sentences. We added our puncuation includidng a comma and fullstop. We also used metaphors and similies.
After creating our poem we proof read it and edited the poem. We rearranged words, added words and deleted words. I found this activity fun because I got to hear everyones powerful poems. I also liked my one because I think me and Leon did a good job writing our poem.
Malo e Lele’i Micah your poem is really powerful I liked how you used the words. "Blades clashing together as you fight your enemy" in your poem thats a really cool thing to add to your poem. What did you find hard about making your poem? What is you favorite line in your poem?
ReplyDeletehi Micah
ReplyDeletegood job I see how much work you have done and it also show if you have been on task